Improving on Perfection (19th January 2008)

On the blog of Matthew Paul Thomas ([mpt]), I found the famous quote of what perfection is.

The supplied translation to English:

It seems that perfection is reached not when there is nothing left to add, but when there is nothing left to take away.

Antoine de Saint-Exupéry.

He gives a series of reformulations, ending with:

Perfection is not when there’s no more to add, but when there’s no more to remove.

Matthew Paul Thomas.

The original text always seemed riddled with multi-negatives to me. His reformulation retains them, it just phrases them more concisely. But it’s an improvement, for sure.

Maybe my attempts are better: